Eavesdropping ~*ROTD*~

Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 22, 2013, 1:00 am

In this utopian moment, with the outside world calm, I offer you my beating heart from my freshly cleaved chest. If you put it to your ear, feel it vibrate against your flesh, you will hear my history...

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 22, 2013, 3:48 am

I love this piece - both for its intimacy and dreamed-of romance, and for its not passing Autumn on the way to cold Winter. Exquisitely-done. Dan

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 22, 2013, 3:56 am

A special poem for a special moment. Makes me feel like raking a few in and plopping in them.

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 22, 2013, 9:24 am

some of those eaves can be very heavy - you need a good pair of boots!

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 22, 2013, 10:10 am

Dandelo wrote:In this utopian moment, with the outside world calm, I offer you my beating heart from my freshly cleaved chest. If you put it to your ear, feel it vibrate against your flesh, you will...

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 22, 2013, 3:50 pm

thank you, dan. yes, autumn is my favorite time of year! curtis, me too!!! thank you so much... right you are, willow. luckily, here it's been quite dry (not that leaves are off the trees yet) but...

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 22, 2013, 8:53 pm

This has a hypnotic quality to it, Dandelo; a poem to totally immerse oneself in. :)

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 23, 2013, 3:19 am

I was captivated from beginning to end ***Clapping***

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 23, 2013, 10:34 am

I think the term "intimacy" was a great way to describe this work. It is very thoughtful and executed in a uniform, yet vocal style

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 23, 2013, 11:03 am

But in the moments I have left, know I’d love to find dancing steps leading to a tree with you behind, waiting to waltz in autumn leaves. What a beautiful segue to autumn. I love the crisp, autumnal...

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August 23, 2013, 3:43 pm

thanks so much to each of you for the generous words you've left here. they are deeply appreciated...

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 30, 2013, 5:04 am

I love the intimacy this ruffles softly with, very much so... Bri~

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

August 30, 2013, 8:20 pm

i'm grateful for the kind words, brian, and happy that you enjoyed this piece. thanks!

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

September 7, 2013, 6:48 am

Seems fantastic, and yet so real.. good poetry will do that, enjoyed.. Dan

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

September 8, 2013, 2:53 pm

thanks so much, dan. I appreciate the kind thoughts on this and the support you always give. thanks again!

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Re: Eavesdropping ~ROTD~

September 8, 2013, 3:19 pm

I offer you my beating heart from my freshly cleaved chest. If you put it to your ear, feel it vibrate against your flesh, you will hear my history as it wasIntimate. The perfect word for this. As...

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